QUOTE(smt nocturne @ Jan 15 2015, 09:33)
Fairly new to editing, thought I'd ask for some input on this.
Before:
After:
I plan to touch things up later, but any advice would be appreciated.
At first glance I don't see any glaring errors, which is good. There's a few spot here and there I could nit-pick, but I find most people don't even notice that kind of stuff. No one is going to read the final draft while comparing it to the original looking for differences.
I would suggest though changing up the area at the bottom spo the line flow better.
While yours is true to original, it looks wierd without the text. I would personally take some liberties and change it up a bit. Unless, of course, it going to end up entirely covered up by new text.
EDIT: Actually, looking at it again, I'm not sure if that's supposed to be fabric or not.
This post has been edited by VTech100: Jan 16 2015, 17:26