[Red's 55th Bounty] [RPG COMPANY ] MOVIE STAR IIa (Ah! My Goddess) -> [English]

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[Red's 55th Bounty] [RPG COMPANY ] MOVIE STAR IIa (Ah! My Goddess) -> [English], Reward: 50,000 C + 50 Hath

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May 30 2011, 17:02 Post #1
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	Because we need an OMG bounty, and this series is very much a classic in need of more attention - and translation View Full Bounty Translate the listed dojin into English. This is a translation-only bounty, a separate bounty will be posted for editing job after the translation bounty is completed.<br /><br />In addition to the carriers listed, you can also just post the translation in the forums or PM me with it.<br /><br />This is my 55th translation bounty.<br /><br />Dojin: http://ehentaihip.com/g/115011/0d7604ef9b/ (RAW)<br /><br />Visit the forums for more information. This bounty has a dedicated thread in our Bounty Request section at /index.php?showforum=82 Related Image: [gu.e-hentai.org] This translation includes credit pages if present. Broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted. Also: * Due to potential misunderstandings about how to split the bounty between translators and editors that resulted in my recent bounties costing me 50%-100% more than listed price, I am now splitting the bounty between translating and editing. The first bounty that goes up in the system is for translating only. Once I have the translation, I'll post the editing bounty; * broken Engrish craplation will not be accepted; * yes, please translate (or at least summarize) any existing author's rants, credits, titles of content, and so on, if present; * yes, please translate into English non-moan SFXes (examples: bounce, giggle, jinngle, creak); * if you do the translating, you should accept the bounty, PM me and post here. Once you've done so, the bounty will be reserved for you, however, if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it; * if you do the editing: please note I would like to upload the gallery to e-h system myself; I am not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What I pay out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year. If you end up posting the translated doujin to the e-h galleries, I'll probably halve the bounty (if you did the translation and editing), or refuse to pay (if you did the editing only; note that the translator will still get fully paid by me); * crappy editing will not be accepted; * please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and my nickname (and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor, and the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host. Sample credit page: link; * those bounties are for the hard work (translation and editing). If you just found the gallery somewhere and just uploaded it here, you are not eligible for my bounties, but I will still give you a reward - 5+5 (apply for it here); * if you find a hq version of the J raw, whether it has or hasn't been translated, I'll reward you for it with a 2+2 reward (apply for it here ); Helpful links for the translators: Guide for New & Potential Translators, Japanese slang, a guide on Japanese onomatopoeia (Tonigobe), [www.writtensound.com] www.writtensound.com, Bad translations. Examples of. Helpful links for the editors: Comprehensive editing guide, Your Tips for Manga Editing! Also: Bounty Etiquette This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 27 2012, 00:39 -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream

Aug 12 2012, 09:26 Post #2
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	Well, I see someone picked up the bounty already. Let me know if it doesn't work out. -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 12 2012, 19:20 Post #3
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	Weeell, thanks for pointing that out, as the "Double 00" guy did not post here or PM me (I see this older bounty does not have my more recent usual request to notify me in such a fashion; as there are no system notification of a bounty being accepted). I'll ask him if he really intends to work on it. If not, would you be interested? This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 12 2012, 19:21 -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream

Aug 13 2012, 02:41 Post #4
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	QUOTE(Red_Piotrus @ Aug 12 2012, 13:20) Weeell, thanks for pointing that out, as the "Double 00" guy did not post here or PM me (I see this older bounty does not have my more recent usual request to notify me in such a fashion; as there are no system notification of a bounty being accepted). I'll ask him if he really intends to work on it. If not, would you be interested? I would be, but I can't guarantee I'll finish it by the end of August. That and I'm going on a long business trip in September (a.k.a. it might be slow). At worst, I'll either have to work on it in piecemeal or get it to you by late Sept. Would you mind giving me some context of the doujinshi also? I've flipped through it and it seems like there should be some earlier volume/plot that I'm missing out on. Hasegawa was mentioned in the story, and I have no idea how she would have gotten involved with the "business". RPG Company do tons of AMG doujins, and it would be difficult for me to get an idea of which one are tie to what. Would appreciate if you can clear it up. That or I'll just have to read through all of their AMG doujins... This post has been edited by DGze: Aug 13 2012, 02:42 -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 13 2012, 04:36 Post #5
Double 00 Lurker Group: Recruits Posts: 8 Joined: 6-January 10 Level 45 (Novice) +K	I'll do my best on this. I have plenty to practice with by super s.

Aug 13 2012, 06:30 Post #6
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	QUOTE(Double 00 @ Aug 12 2012, 22:36) I'll do my best on this. I have plenty to practice with by super s. good luck then -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 13 2012, 19:11 Post #7
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	Well, DGze, if you'd like, I can bountify the second part in the series that needs translation. That would be the short Skuld story from IIb http://ehentaihip.com/g/146949/bbecb51275/ The first story has been translated in IIb Plus: http://ehentaihip.com/g/284344/d30e45a437/ and it probably would be a waste of time to do it again -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream

Aug 25 2012, 04:18 Post #8
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	I got a translation from ###### (WTF, his username causes filters here??) It looks good enough that I want to accept it, but first, I want to clarify whether ###### is Double 00? Note: almost two weeks have passed since Double 00 accepted the bounty, and I've received no progress report from him. And the bounty does say: "if the translation is not completed within 2 weeks, it will be considered stalled/dropped and other translators will be allowed to work on it.". So I am pretty much prepared to give the bounty to ###### either way, but IF they are two different translators and Double 00 wants to share his work, I would be willing to put a second (smaller) bounty as a compensation for the work done. Also: editing bounty is up at http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=6354 but I still need to finish proofreading this, proof notes will be posted below QUOTE [RPG COMPANY (Toumi Haruka)] MOVIE STAR IIa (Aa! Megami-sama! [Ah! My Goddess]) Raw is taken from the link you have given, it doesn't contain page #2, so the total page is 50 but the last page number is page #51 -------- Page #5 -------- Automotive Club Registration Meeting First Second ================================================================== -------- Page #6 -------- Ha Owh New guest, huh ? Hey You said it's just student, but she's different Hey you're not listening, huh ... It's my first time... You said "Welcome" didn't you ? & you said "Please come inside"...nhh Hey wait a minute We're just some highschool student How can we possibly hold a meeting ================================================================== -------- Page #7 -------- Owh shit Ah Ha Ha AAH... Ha...H Having sex really feels so hot, huh. you came so early, so I'm the winner here (Belldandy) Damn bitch, come on I know you are busy, but can you please wait here for a little longer Eeer,,,hnh I'm sorry...nhhh I can't do that. You're not pretending to come here mistakenly,are you? Uuuh...No that's... That's not...Nhhh What I mean It's just that... I might need some money... I've been told that i will surely receive it here.. . They told me if i beg for it, i will get it for free easily. I guess the automotive club's chief will be so angry at me. Aanh...but Firstly, it's because I haven't received any money... So, firstly, it's because you really sucks in obtaining the money, huh Am I right ? ..y..yes you're right, but ================================================================== -------- Page #8 -------- So, So, right now, you're earning income for tis money leecher, huh. Eeerr That's good, as long as you can fully enjoy the pleasure. More than that, your body's still young like a blooming flower here. ...I guess so. You're still new in this sex business. But i gess you don't need to explain it now. I wonder what kind of way you will use for obtaining guests in the school. Well causing an uproar is our automotive club's duty anyway. But you know The university's official recognintion will be announced shortly, right ? ...Maybe I don't really know about that. Nhhh Ha Ha Many teachers are coming, even the doujin circle guys mostly are coming too, aren't they ? Recently they come in quite a number of waiting lines. Nhn Ohh Ha Haa Ohh Ha oh well, forget it. i need to enjoy this. ================================================================== -------- Page #9 -------- But No matter how many times i fuck you. Your hole still feels so good... Really... i never get tired of you. So, the guys in automotive club will always keep this as secret, will they ? Why do you suddenly entrust this secret to us ? I don't know either... I'm sure it's because you want to hear me out osatanigawa-san. LICK Ha Sounds like difficult stuff... Well, alright. I'm grateful for your openly liberal mind. Hnn Nfuh I guess the clubroom will be rushed by some deceived guys. It'll be great uproar when the video sample of you, appear on the market.... We'll do it just like this. It'll help you as your beginning promotion to the outside. Aah Ha Ah He He Oh yeah, moreover, i have to train you properly. This will be your first place to enjoy the training. This is so.... I can't hold back anymore.... ================================================================== -------- Page #10 -------- So, what about those teachers... Hah What kind of rumour that could make the teachers come here ? Eeerrr...Nhhh I haven't decided yet.... For special guests & stuff like that... AHA Ah Oh, i see yeah. Hah They've gotten softer lately Those guys used to be so irritating when they're counting the price before...hnnhh Ah Ahn Hah Nh Such as price for this hole... Price for body posture... Price for cumming inside....Hnnh I don't know how to say this. It's like Their eyes will be jumping out when they see you. Hah Huh ... That's the first time i heard something like that. Hah I never knew, it was arranged like that....hnnnhh So, they're going to dispute it that far, huh... ================================================================== -------- Page #11 -------- Thanks to you...hnnh Hah Hah Right now hnnh We can have sex like this We can do it as many times as i want...hnn ! Ah Haa He he he.... I can fill you to the brim with my cum, can I ? hah Ahaaa... you're so amazing. Hah This is just how good my cock's condition is when i'm fucking. Han ...Wow.... I'm so happy...that my first time feels this good Ha I'm just too good to be defeated by the other guys here. nhhmm, you got skill in using that tounge... I'm almost ready for another shot.... Nhhh come on, come on, spread your legs, hnnh Fuh Nhn Nh Nhh, Hnnn...you love my pussy, don't you,....Hnnhh ================================================================== -------- Page #12 -------- I can hear you, looks like you two are getting along. Hah It's fine, right ? You can ask her out if you want to get intimate with her. Nhn ? That's just like first come, first serve, isn't it ? Leave us alone ! Eerrr... you two are really good friends huh. You too girl, don't just mating only with him.... Nhhh You got to work hard to make me feel good too. Ha Eeehmm...Alright then, let's do it together...Hnnhh Sheeesh can't help it... Well then, come here Nhh, Fuuuh Is that alright ? Doing it like this... Hnn ? What're you worrying at this late ? if that feels good....then everything is fine... shall i dry up your balls ? Hah nhhh nothing. It's not that we're messed up here. Don't ruin the mood please. You have to keep stroking til it's slippery if you want an excuse. ....Really ? You know, somehow.... If belldandy from automotive club becomes so famous, someday, she'll get admirer who will go crazy for her. They'll have the urge to disgrace & make her dirty. No, Really. I love her much....what the hell am I saying. ================================================================== -------- Page #13 -------- Fuh So, Like i said, it'll be O.K. if we drench her pussy with our semen... I want to defile more of this sexy body. Oh yeah like that... Hold the penis in your mouth. Owh she's putting such dirty face. Fuh Hah Hah Chu Chuph We made it...This will become our prostitution place. Owh i can't take it. I've never gottten this serious before... We'll get everyone attention... Fuh Are you going to take another pleasure hour packet ? Nh Nh Fuh Cuh You have such an amazing chest. Is she going to break down too ? ================================================================== -------- Page #14 -------- Sensei.... Can we have sex together sooner ...? Ha Hah hah Since you want to try it once... it'll be good to discuss the price first. Owhh! I'm still in preparation for that, sorry. ...are you stupi, why are you leting this rare chance for discussing discount, it's usual to sell high price for adult. Hey wait a minute you idiot... it seems you don't understand yet , huh. Oh well, I will carefully take a look at it ! Whether i will buy or i won't buy, i'll have to see the item first. Ah This girl's selling point is her hole.... I don't care for whoose sake but, spreading your legs wider will surely earn some income for you. ================================================================== -------- Page #15 -------- What do you mean by that selling point. Look at how good her body posture. Kuh Nh..hhh First thing is this spot. Bucha Bucha Bucha It's so shameless, & always has this sensation to suck me in. When you stick it inside, I wonder how soft it feels in my fat cock,... I might get addicted to this. Hn Nh Anyway, it seems anyone who reach her deepest part won't hold it & cum inside her. It's quite sensitive. So if anyone cum inside her, it'll react with trembling. If you spurt all your cum, her pusy will gladly dry up your muddy penis. Owh, look at that.... Sensei, you've exaggerated too much... Ha Nhhh Like i said, your pussy always like this, huh. ================================================================== -------- Page #16 -------- So that's all sensei. You have nothing to loose if you buy her. Is there any pther school that's starting this kind of underground business... Oh yes, I remember,.... There's none, right ? Ha Ha Nhh Aa...hhh If it's not because of Osatanigawa-san.... I guess...Many more guests will come.... Hey, Hey, How far are you going to blame me ? You got a pitiful life while studying in university, don't you ? Oh.. I think so Oh well, you're seriously broken down, you know. So, this hole here is for that sake, huh. Kyaa..hh Wa..it, I'm not..broken down that low. Only us in the automotive club that can get her with cheap, because we help her as sex practice partner. From now on, for your body selling's sake, can we fuck you with cheaper price ? ================================================================== -------- Page #17 -------- Sheesh I wonder how perverted you are Owh what a waste, gotta put it back inside... Sensei, i tell you one thing, this girl is quite broken down. Ha She's nicely scretched in front of us today. Kya She will cum directly after you shoved her insides. Please don't get fooled by her cute face. Kuh That... About that thing... Haa... Aah...You embarass me. Come on, show us your real nature hn Fuhn Nfuh I know you don't feel that embarassed Or should i enter my own switch on you, huh. Ah That hole is going to be very famous you know. ================================================================== -------- Page #18 -------- Hn We'll punish you here if you're slacking in our sex lecture. We'll take off your clothes all the time... Chu Chuph Nhhf if you're broken down. Chu Chu Fuhh Wow, is the switch already entered ? well then Will you lick my penis again ? Kuhh Ahaa...hh Please I will lick it, I Really love it... Alright then, tell me what kind of cock that you really love ? I love cock like this one....nhhh It stands up very fast like a kid's cock.. What about semen ? Do you like to be filled to the brim with cum ? Yes i love it. As I thought, the number one i love is when it's spurting out wildly inside me.... You love being sprayed all over by cum too, right. What about sucking til it's really sticky with saliva ? Sheeesh that's the best... I love it So you're going to be A Yes-Woman, right. Ahn Come on, Hold it in your mouth. Sensei is already waiting Ohh ================================================================== -------- Page #19 -------- Like I said, Sensei is already waiting.... Nfuh Fuh When she wakes up, she'll be gulping down the cum. I have to be careful so that i won't cum too fast...Nghhh When you see her like this. Actually she's quite lewd. Not only today, ...We've already trained her properly by fucking with everyone Fuh Hafh Back then too. You also came here, right. You won't believe it how far We go as her training partner everyday In order to call her, you have to make a reservation as her partner. so, weekend is specially reserved for guys in the automotive club, huh ? You're right....Hnnhh, this is making me shiver. I forgot how many times i had cum...Hnnnh Hah Hah ================================================================== -------- Page #20 -------- Uhaahh Oh oohh Ku...uh i can't resist this.... Sooner or later all members is going to be overhead addicted to this girl. Chu Chu Hah That's right I bet she'll let them do their dirty delusion as they please...hnnh Chu There are so many of those skipping-lecture bastards...hnnhh Chu Chu Chu Eventhough this university got so many talented girls I guess the automotive club Won't add more extra girls like this one. ================================================================== -------- Page #21 -------- Owh I almost forgot Soon it'll be nice for using your tits too. Nh Huh ? Have you finished that blowjob, huh ? Hey Sensei look at this girl's breast You can't resist that, can you ? Chu Ha Fuh Chu This is the secret, but everyone in the club already know this. it's big & the shape is good Aa...h She's quite mature But she still feels shy to show this. ================================================================== -------- Page #22 -------- You see, this girl is This kind of girl Ha Fuah Hah Hah A...Haa... Hah Don't make me trouble, okay... Fuah Kuh Look ! Kya... Aa..h Wow that's so great.... Does it feel good to store this much milk ? Ha Ha Ah...haaa Yes, you're so good at it...Aah You spurt such amazing amount, i bet you'll be a splendid mama. No way, nhhhn Noooo.... Ahaa...h ================================================================== -------- Page #23 -------- Ah Ah Wow superb...it won't stop/ You still spurting, huh ? It's guzzling out wildly. Haa...Yes...Hnnh More..Nhh Don't strain her. Squeeze more. It used to be so difficult to milk her...Whoaa. I'm lactating... My milk... Nh..hhh So great... I can't take it.... I.... I know it...You're Just perverts. Awesome, looks like she's feeling good... Ah Her milk is warm... Her nipple is erecting too. Ha Haah Haah Her milk is coming out she looks so charming. Hey Let's see how far she has changed. ================================================================== -------- Page #24 -------- Fuh If we milk her everyday, surely this what would happen. Fuh Fuhh So easy to undestand...so who will accept this milking duty ? Hah Ah Do you hate ... Milking me ? I mean this breast milk... Nope, it's just sounds like a lecher's job That's good, isn't it. It's exactly feels like sex. Haa Haa Haa Yeah, that's it, that face looks so lewd, Owh I can't bear it. How many man that have fallen for that lewd manner ? LICK Fuh Nfuh Ha Chu Anyone will definitely gather to taste that body. ================================================================== -------- Page #25 -------- She also got that soft ass. Yes That slippery pussy too That embracable plumpy hips too. Yes Yes Nhh Yes Eek This milking out breast too. I thought this is more than just human's body. More, more entertain me. I'll spray all my semen all over you. Hah Yes Fuh Yes Remember those dirty words... Nfuh Nfuh Fuhh Fuuuh Fuuuh If we do it like this more amazing milk will come out...nhh Her sellling point price is in the top price list, you know ================================================================== -------- Page #26 -------- Oh well, it's business, Do you think its good to cum alone, huh. Hah Haah Haaah Hah Hah I'm... So sorry...Hnnh.... But that's good. You look erotic enough Aah, can't take it...Hnghh...after you finish with sensei. Will you let me fuck you again ? Haa ...Ye-ss...Nghh More...Please teach me a lot of things...Ngghhhh Hah Haa Well then, I won't hold back, I'll cum & pour all of it inside. Kyaa...I'm..Nghhh shivering....Nghhh I'll pump all my cum inside you Ahhh it's sucking me in. Hey Mr.Guest, Let me tell you one thing. Don't get surprised if I suddenly come and wait here. ================================================================== -------- Page #27 -------- Sorry for making you wait...please come in Hah This shop is selling girls like me. My name is Belldandy... Would you buy me please ? Yes... This is my lewd holes... They're all exist as your partner...So that you can insert your penis there. No matter which hole you choose, It will give you amazing pleasure. Please fill it by thrusting your penis inside. You can pump all your semen to the hole that mostly feels so good... Please don't hold back & pour it all inside me...Hnhhh ================================================================== -------- Page #28 -------- You came back to fuck me, right Hah Yes , I came back to fuck you... Hah Afterall we're coming here to gangrape you, you know. I think so...I lost my sex match with that guest... ...but it felt really good... Did it felt that good ? That feels great...for me... Please...Take your time to make love to me thoroughly... Now that you mention it...I got called by anonymous number so many times before.... So you don't know who's calling you, huh ? Maybe the caller is a lewd person like me too... The caller said some nice words : "I'm shivering...Hnnh Can't hold myself from fuckng"... ...if the caller says dirty thing like that, you might be in danger. Ahaaa...hh...I see I'm really sorry. ================================================================== -------- Page #29 -------- ...Really, if you wear that clothes. Your mood seems to be changing. I think you look so worried sometime ago Now you're just like any ordinary girl. ...Owh really ? That's lewd, you know. Come on Don't you want to check me out down here ? Well, No we will do it after we come back...hh ------------ Page #30-31 ------------ Blank ================================================================== -------- Page #32 -------- Rectangle box 1 As usual she is very kind with that smiling face... So beautiful. Rectangle box 2 That reminds me. I've never seen her angry face.... Rectangle box 3 I wonder, Does senpai can get angry too... ? I really envy her What's more, she looks like a model for painting. If it's me, I could also do some simple sweeping... She looks shining... maybe like a shining sun ? Hey your hands are freezing. Uwaaah If you have finished arranging would you like some tea ? Ahaah Thanks to senpai, I can finish this figure balance in my script this month. I'm thinking of making a new clubroom again. It's doing well, but I'm so impatience. Should I just take out these retiring members.... ================================================================== -------- Page #33 -------- Both of us are restarting the automotive club well enough. So, it's about time to recruit new member, huh ? We need personal to say "Thanks for coming", then we will select the fitting person. Yes, I think so. You can leave it to me. Alright,... Since you want to help Let's hold the automotive club's tradition. ..."The Enjoyable Lunch" Owh Looks like we need a good idead to hype it up... such as stage maker... Owh, i get it. I'm thinking of using Skuld-chan But i've seen this stage thing so many times. Should they just come for an interview ? Owh...Well... I'm not sure skuld will do that. ... I see, come directly for interview, huh. Is it alright if we do it carefully later ? If i'm not mistaken we have another arrangement today... Aaahh !? You're right AAaaa Se-, Senpai hurry, hurry get ready ! ================================================================== -------- Page #34 -------- Aah, Your late Se-, Se- Senpai, hurry hurry Nhhh ...Hey Why are you wearing hard-to-move clothes... Is this clothes weird ? But I really want to try this for once... Rectangle Box 1 ...Oh my Hnh When We're in trouble... Rectangle Box 2 No matter what condition it is, Belldandy senpai's smiling face always solve the problem... You're late, what the hell are you doing. You're bothering him, right ? Hey, you automotive club freak. Uuuh... So-, Sorry it was my mistake. Eeeerr.. Hnh I'm the one who choose this clothes, we're late because i got confused which one to wear. We also need time to think about the preparation, you know. We're very sorry, thanks for waiting. ================================================================== -------- Page #35 -------- E,Eerrrr....It's time for a little service... Uaaah, they're already here... He can't take it so he got nosebleed. ...Excuse me, what's with this set/ We're from theater research society So, let me tell you this, ...huh, Hey ! What're you hiding behind that silky basket ? No, well Look straight before your eyes... He's just not drunk enough... You're slut...aren't you. Get ready to start from me Oh Hah Mffuh Haugh Oh...Hey I'll take care of that face....Hnh, Show it to me. Say, "Aaaan" ! (What's with that absentminded face)... ================================================================== -------- Page #36 -------- Uhaah I'm Cum-... Cumming Ah Finally, I can see this, Kuuhh !! Oh, hey turn her face here Hnh I made it ...Hnh I cum from rubbing against her back ear ...! Uoohhh..oh, Ooh my dick, feels so great... Cumming...Hnh This feels so great...! Kyaa Ohh sorry ...Hnh Hey don't rush her ...Hnh Break her down Rubbing it with her rolled hair... feels so good Hnh Come on, Come on, Don't look that way... What a nice facial Hnnhh Hey Hey, everyone... Don't force her too far, alright ? Hah Puhaa Spurt Spurt Wait..! Let me target my shot to you ! Her cheek is all sticky, feels so soft. Come on, your head ! I want to try this white back...Hnh ! Kya... Nh Nh ================================================================== -------- Page #37 -------- Hah Great Fuhh This is for Today's cum Uha Goh Guh Take it Khuuh Shuooo Fuuuhh Ugh Ugh Hn Hn Rectangle box 1 Today is 7 mei, she's working parttime job for 60 minutes. Rectangle box 2 Sometimes there's a popular request... For this kind of play. Rectangle box 3 It's not as easy as it looks... Actually it's quite troublesome. Ooh... What a pretty accessory... Spurt Eeeeh Hey, You cum in that maniac spot again,... Wait, Don't lift up your face...Nhhn Rectangle box 4 Customer will gather around her with their high-storaged cum. Hiiih NNh Ah that hurts Spurt Jizz Hey, you hear me ? are you okay ? Hnh ? Yes, I can hear...you/ Fuh Fuh Ahh Ah Rectangle box 5 Those guys are imagining they can fullfil their desire... Uhaa...She's all sticky awesome... Aah... Look at her breast..Hnnnh She got such a big breast ! Rectangle box 6 & Their desire keeps on escalating... ================================================================== -------- Page #38 -------- Wa-, Wait... Don't play her too rough... I can't hold it back ! Don't worry it's alright if we get a bit rough Fuh Hah Aaah, Don't come ! Damn, I can't direct the shot to her crack...Hnnh Huh ? what's with this clothes... Rectangle box 1 Someone need to effectively control them from running wild... Ah, Eeerrr Nothing for today !? No activity today, get it ? HOw about you, Why do you come late ? You said you'll give us a little service. We've heard the rumour, you know. Puhaa Aaa, yes. That rumour ! It's alright even if yuo strip her off to nude, isn't it ? I also see her appear in a video, it's your doing, right ? It said she will let us rub her cute breast. You have nothing to hide now ! let's just strip off her breast. Rectangle box 2 Ever since Belldandy senpai volunteers, those bastards are doing her as they please... Puhaa Fuh Fuh That sounds good ! She's even sexier than in the video Rectangle box 3 She is always washed away by lewd situation like that... Come on, Come on, Show us your breast. ================================================================== -------- Page #39 -------- Rectangle box 1 Senpai, it turned out into famous rumour. There are so many hard-cumming bastard this time... I'm not so... Good in doing this stuff... I'll decide that later Yeah, yeah, that's good... It's true, she's drinking it... Kya Just from shaking her up... She looks this damn sexy. Ngh This necklace is in the way. Let's take it off. Here it comes ! Uhaahh ! Awesome ! It's very big... Moreover her nipples are erected, huh ? Well, let's use this big breasts...Hnh Aahh Ahh Ahh Aah Let's use her face too ...Hnhh I'll make her drink our cumshot... ================================================================== -------- Page #40 -------- Poh Poh Keho (Cough Sound) Keho Keh Hoh Kaaahh...Awesome, She's gathering our cum. If it's like this, it means you're begging "Please Rape Me" "Rape Me", aren't you ? Don't you afraid of us ? This is like the famous "Gangrape" isn't it. That's why, it's good, isn't it. Please take care of everyone here.We won't hold back & command you like our subordinate, We don't care what happens later. But, we can only spreading cum, Huh. Whoa, Today I can get rid of that "No" Answer from her. I love filling her mouth to the brim while she's rolling her tounge. Uhaaahhh... What a soft Lips... Let it out...! Uuh, Uuugh Nhh Gubh Ngh Yeah, Yeah Let it out, Let it out, Hnnhh... Npuh Fuhh Nh Nhh Fu Ngh Nh Buhaaahh ! Awesome, Ooohhh, she feels so good, Hnnh Uhaahh this lewd tounge ...Hnnh it's sucking me in ....Hnnh Aah...Cumming ================================================================== -------- Page #41 -------- Uph Puh Puh Ha Ha... Her pretty cheek is drenched... Just like that, I splattered my cum inside her mouth. Rectangle box 1 Belldandy senpai is very quiet. Nh That's so good come on, shake it Nhii Npuh Npuh Uph Khaaah she's so dirty. spilling out the cum from her mouth again. Whoa I'm hard again... She feels shudder with that worried face... She's very suited to serve many guys. Let's see.. ? Ohh this mouth will be lump of meat to fulfill our sexual desire... Fuh Ohh it's overflowing... Is she already at her limit ? No, that's nothing. She still got some more ! Fuh Hiih Yeah, yeah, I want to try that piece of H-O-L-E ! Want me to move it ? Alright, Ahh is that good ? Fuhii Rectangle box 2 They're riding her like giving punishment to her... Buhii (pig sound) Nhn Nhh Nghh Nghnh ================================================================== -------- Page #42 -------- Nhh Nghh Hiih Hiih Nh Uohh...I'm cumming Nhh Feels...so great Nhh Is it coming inside properly, huh ? Nghiiih Nhn Nh Bupi Guhh Fugh Nhiiih Yes Nfuhh Nghh Yes Oh Oh What a great facial, Look, From her nose... Don't worry, I'm still holding back... You drink that, huh ? You know that's so honest & cute. Puhh Yeah, Keep it that way, Take it, Take it Nhh Nghh Puhh Ugh Ugh Uhaa...h Can't take it....Hnh Uo...hh I came so hard Like this...Come on suck it ! Ugh Nfuhh Buh Kahaaa Nghah Ah Bifh Aaaah... it's gushing it from... That spot again... Ngohhh Kahh Gohhh Gohoohh Nh Guess she can't breath in....With that great amount of sperm. She's shivering... Fuhh Kah ha Ngh ================================================================== -------- Page #43 -------- Ohh Fuah Fuahh Guhiiii Guhiiinh Hah... Yes Please... Don't treat my insides awfully Lick Lick Look she's so... cute ! She looks like she's going to burst. Ahn... Gha Aghh Ghh Come on, Cum on her as many as you want ! Look at her She's so excited Haggh Hiafn Hiih HiiH Hih Bufh Bufh Spurt There's a lot cum in her ear too... Nghiih Nghiih Uhaahhh...Her aroused face is so sticky ! Ngufh Nhii Ngfuh Look, she's breathing in cum ! Good, she's obidient Fghah Let see, How much cum packed in your nose ? Nhii Nfuh Uhaah There's so much cum entering her nose Nhah Ah Come on show it to everyone. Aaah she looks broken down Fuhh Hahh Fuhiih Habh Hah Fuahh Aah ================================================================== -------- Page #44 -------- Hiiih Fuhh Fuhii Yes ! Her teeth feels so slippery Ahh what a good sensation The cum looks like her toothpaste Yes, I'm laughing Uugh... She become this lewd just from violating her mouth. Look at her face when i tease this spot... Aagh Fugh Uhaaahh, Awesome ! She spilled it from her big mouth Fuh Ha Haah Buhaah Tasty ! Buhiiih ! Buhiiih Buhii She's making such a slutty face ! Let's take a photo Uuuh it's spourting out... Yeah like that, You're a loose slut. She's like a different person when she's cumming Hey... isn't that too far ? Don't worry, whatever we do, she won't get angry. She's also in the good mood anyway... Go on you slut Say this, "Thanks for the hardwork" I'll hang out with her a little longer. ================================================================== -------- Page #45 -------- Hohh Nhh Obufhh Nghh Kuhaaaahhh...Look at her... Owh you definitely want to try this for once... Nhhh Come on, Next is my turn, You hear me. Ahii Hiiin Make sure you drink all of it. Ohh good girl, good girl. Ooh Gaaf Ughh Ugoh Ghoh Nghh Fuh Uffuh Buhaah Nfuhh Nbuhh Ngfuh Puhh Ohaah Nfuahh Oghah Hiii...she's drinking it for real. Gulp Fuah Gahh Go on drink it drink it... Ngah Fuhah Nhhih Hih Your belly is already swollen with cum, then you came, huh... Npuhh... Fuhiii Ohh Nbuhii Ohhiii Nbuh Nhh Yes Hiiiihn ================================================================== -------- Page #46 -------- ...Ooh yes... Yes Hnh More...Give me More Nhhh let me drain your penis... Don't just pass out on me, get it? Give it to me Hagh Ah Hah Give it to me ghhh Maybe she's already broken Nhah Yes Heey, Wake up your mind, get back here. Owh, look, she regains conciousness, ahh so cute... Ha Just leave it that way, let's go together with her to the bathroom Afterall, we got dried-up, can't cum anymore. Hah Fuh Hu-... Ha... Huh...? If we beg for it, Of course she'll let us do her in the bath, right ? Looks like she'll hear any request. Would you like to hear our thoughts ? Fuh if she heard that, wouldn't she get angry ? Well that's... Ha ha...ha ? ================================================================== -------- Page #47 -------- They're just first time apprentice. But this is quite much..Nhh I could get addicted to this smell...what should i do ? Rectangle box 1 ..No matter what time it is Senpai always puts on that smiling face... Rectangle box 2 ...Her angry face is so lovely. ... Aah ... Rectangle box 3 ...Strict scolding Why is she scolding me too Rectangle box 4 Even senpai also has the time when she could get angry. ================================================================== -------- Page #48 -------- Fuh... ....Fuh Are youo surprised today...? Knowing that I'd do such lewd things ================================================================== -------- Page #49 -------- Are you alright...? Please don't go anywhere, aright. It's for your own sake, you know... ================================================================== -------- Page #50 -------- Blank ================================================================== -------- Page #51 -------- Blank ================================================================== This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 25 2012, 04:22 -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? 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Aug 25 2012, 04:44 Post #9
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Aug 25 2012, 21:07 Post #10
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	... I don't even know what to say. Other than damn that lucky high school student Osatanigawa-san. It's not everyday some HS student can just wander into a college and bang Belldandy. Seriously, speechless. In fact, I'm so angry about his good fortune that I feel like strangling something the more I read his adventure. Damn you Osatanigawa-san! This post has been edited by DGze: Aug 25 2012, 21:11 -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 25 2012, 21:16 Post #11
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	double post sorry This post has been edited by DGze: Aug 25 2012, 21:17 -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 25 2012, 23:33 Post #12
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	I have received PMs saying that this translation is poor. I will review English soon, but if it is the case of poor translation from Japanese, I cannot verify that as I don't read it. If you want to comment on the quality of the translation, please do it here, I will keep the bounty under discussion for the next 2-3 days. -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream

Aug 26 2012, 04:15 Post #13
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	Orange, is comment/quick correction Red is just plain wrong (will add explanation if needed, too lazy, not big enough deal) If you didn't make a mark, it doesn't mean it's not wrong. I've let some stuff slide cause they're borderline acceptable. QUOTE [RPG COMPANY (Toumi Haruka)] MOVIE STAR IIa (Aa! Megami-sama! [Ah! My Goddess]) Raw is taken from the link you have given, it doesn't contain page #2, so the total page is 50 but the last page number is page #51 -------- Page #5 -------- Automotive Club Registration Meeting <- Auto Club or Motor Club is closest to official english translation First <- should be "Appointments 13:00~" or "Reserved 13:00~" Second <- should be "All others 15:00~" ================================================================== -------- Page #6 -------- Ha Owh New guest, huh ? <- Here お客さん is contextually used to means "customer." Hey You said it's just student, but she's different <- "I'm actually a student here, so that's not really correct... Hey you're not listening, huh <- "hey hey...what's going on here....?" ... It's my first time... You said "Welcome" didn't you ? & you said "Please come inside"...nhh <- "is...is it your first time here? welcome..." Hey wait a minute We're just some highschool student "hey wait a minute, I'm just a (regular) student!" <-nowhere is "high school" ever mentioned How can we possibly hold a meeting ...I don't think we're allowed to do this... ================================================================== -------- Page #7 -------- Owh shit Ah Ha Ha AAH... Ha...H Having sex really feels so hot, huh. you came so early, so I'm the winner here (Belldandy) " Sorry Professor/Teacher(センセ), It's first come first serve! <- what bugs me the most is that you correctly translated sensei on page 16 below, but you somehow didn't here. Damn bitch, come on I know you are busy, but can you please wait here for a little longer Eeer,,,hnh I'm sorry...nhhh I can't do that. You're not pretending to come here mistakenly,are you? Uuuh...No that's... That's not...Nhhh What I mean It's just that... I might need some money... I've been told that i will surely receive it here.. . They told me if i beg for it, i will get it for free easily. I guess the automotive club's chief will be so angry at me. Firstly, it's because I haven't received any money... So, firstly, it's because you really sucks in obtaining the money, huh Am I right ? ..y..yes you're right, but I'm too lazy to type it out line by line, but basically here bell is telling the guy that she has to start charging money (basically the happy hour has passed). That she was reminded that she needs to collect money from customers. In response, the guy mocked her saying "You allowed people to do it for free just by begging, it's no wonder that (club) president would be mad" (look at where the bubble is pointing that, the line is not spoken by bell. Bell responded "ah...but" "we never started charging at first...so..." "but you still allowed people to slide by, didn't you?" (the rest are okay...) ================================================================== -------- Page #8 -------- So, So, right now, you're earning income for tis money leecher, huh. Eeerr That's good, as long as you can fully enjoy the pleasure. More than that, your body's still young like a blooming flower here. ...I guess so. You're still new in this sex business. But i gess you don't need to explain it now. I wonder what kind of way you will use for obtaining guests in the school. Well causing an uproar is our automotive club's duty anyway. But you know The university's official recognintion will be announced shortly, right ? it's (the sex business) going to be officially recognized in this university soon, isn't it?" ...Maybe I don't really know about that. Nhhh Ha Ha Many teachers are coming, even the doujin circle guys mostly are coming too, aren't they? "Even the professors are coming too...I guess almost all of the clubs have by also, haven't they?" Recently they come in quite a number of waiting lines. Nhn Ohh Ha Haa Ohh Ha oh well, forget it. i need to enjoy this. ================================================================== -------- Page #9 -------- But No matter how many times i fuck you. Your hole still feels so good... Really... i never get tired of you. So, the guys in automotive club will always keep this as secret, will they ? Why do you suddenly entrust this secret to us ? "So wasn't this this an auto/motor club members only thing?" "why is it open to the public all of a sudden?" I don't know either... I'm sure it's because you want to hear me out osatanigawa-san. IT'S HASEWGAWA（長谷川）yes, "osatanigawa" will get you the same set of kanji, but no one reads it that way. Also, the line is "I'm not sure either...but I'm sure if you ask Hasegawa-san..." here Hasegawa is referring to: [ohmygoddess.wikia.com] http://ohmygoddess.wikia.com/wiki/Sora_Hasegawa A.K.A. The motor club president. LICK Ha Sounds like difficult stuff... Well, alright. I'm grateful for your openly liberal mind. "Oh well, I'm glad that it's open to the public anyway." Hnn Nfuh I guess the clubroom will be rushed by some deceived guys. It'll be great uproar when the video sample of you, appear on the market.... We'll do it just like this. It'll help you as your beginning promotion to the outside. Aah Ha Ah He He Oh yeah, moreover, i have to train you properly. This will be your first place to enjoy the training. This is so.... I can't hold back anymore.... ================================================================== -------- Page #10 -------- So, what about those teachers... Hah What kind of rumour that could make the teachers come here ? Eeerrr...Nhhh I haven't decided yet.... For special guests & stuff like that... AHA Ah Oh, i see yeah. Hah They've gotten softer lately Those guys used to be so irritating when they're counting the price before...hnnhh Ah Ahn Hah Nh Such as price for this hole... Price for body posture... Price for cumming inside....Hnnh I don't know how to say this. It's like Their eyes will be jumping out when they see you. Hah Huh ... That's the first time i heard something like that. Hah I never knew, it was arranged like that....hnnnhh So, they're going to dispute it that far, huh... ================================================================== -------- Page #11 -------- Thanks to you...hnnh Hah Hah Right now hnnh We can have sex like this We can do it as many times as i want...hnn ! Ah Haa He he he.... I can fill you to the brim with my cum, can I ? hah Ahaaa... you're so amazing. Hah This is just how good my cock's condition is when i'm fucking. Han ...Wow.... I'm so happy...that my first time feels this good Ha I'm just too good to be defeated by the other guys here. nhhmm, you got skill in using that tounge... I'm almost ready for another shot.... Nhhh come on, come on, spread your legs, hnnh Fuh Nhn Nh Nhh, Hnnn...you love my pussy, don't you,....Hnnhh ================================================================== -------- Page #12 -------- I can hear you, looks like you two are getting along. Hah It's fine, right ? You can ask her out if you want to get intimate with her. Nhn ? That's just like first come, first serve, isn't it ? Leave us alone ! Eerrr... you two are really good friends huh. You too girl, don't just mating only with him.... Nhhh You got to work hard to make me feel good too. Ha Eeehmm...Alright then, let's do it together...Hnnhh Sheeesh can't help it... Well then, come here Nhh, Fuuuh Is that alright ? Doing it like this... Hnn ? What're you worrying at this late ? if that feels good....then everything is fine... shall i dry up your balls ? Hah nhhh nothing. It's not that we're messed up here. Don't ruin the mood please. You have to keep stroking til it's slippery if you want an excuse. ....Really ? You know, somehow.... If belldandy from automotive club becomes so famous, someday, she'll get admirer who will go crazy for her. They'll have the urge to disgrace & make her dirty. No, Really. I love her much....what the hell am I saying. ================================================================== -------- Page #13 -------- Fuh So, Like i said, it'll be O.K. if we drench her pussy with our semen... I want to defile more of this sexy body. Oh yeah like that... Hold the penis in your mouth. Owh she's putting such dirty face. Fuh Hah Hah Chu Chuph We made it...This will become our prostitution place. Owh i can't take it. I've never gottten this serious before... We'll get everyone attention... Fuh Are you going to take another pleasure hour packet ? Nh Nh Fuh Cuh You have such an amazing chest. Is she going to break down too ? ================================================================== -------- Page #14 -------- Sensei.... Can we have sex together sooner ...? Ha Hah hah Since you want to try it once... it'll be good to discuss the price first. Owhh! I'm still in preparation for that, sorry. ...are you stupi, why are you leting this rare chance for discussing discount, it's usual to sell high price for adult. Hey wait a minute you idiot... it seems you don't understand yet , huh. Oh well, I will carefully take a look at it ! Whether i will buy or i won't buy, i'll have to see the item first. Ah This girl's selling point is her hole.... I don't care for whoose sake but, spreading your legs wider will surely earn some income for you. ================================================================== -------- Page #15 -------- What do you mean by that selling point. Look at how good her body posture. Kuh Nh..hhh First thing is this spot. Bucha Bucha Bucha It's so shameless, & always has this sensation to suck me in. When you stick it inside, I wonder how soft it feels in my fat cock,... I might get addicted to this. Hn Nh Anyway, it seems anyone who reach her deepest part won't hold it & cum inside her. It's quite sensitive. So if anyone cum inside her, it'll react with trembling. If you spurt all your cum, her pusy will gladly dry up your muddy penis. Owh, look at that.... Sensei, you've exaggerated too much... Ha Nhhh Like i said, your pussy always like this, huh. ================================================================== -------- Page #16 -------- So that's all sensei. You have nothing to loose if you buy her. Is there any pther school that's starting this kind of underground business... Oh yes, I remember,.... There's none, right ? Ha Ha Nhh Aa...hhh If it's not because of Osatanigawa-san.... I guess...Many more guests will come.... Hey, Hey, How far are you going to blame me ? You got a pitiful life while studying in university, don't you ? Oh.. I think so Oh well, you're seriously broken down, you know. So, this hole here is for that sake, huh. Kyaa..hh Wa..it, I'm not..broken down that low. Only us in the automotive club that can get her with cheap, because we help her as sex practice partner. From now on, for your body selling's sake, can we fuck you with cheaper price ? ================================================================== -------- Page #17 -------- Sheesh I wonder how perverted you are Owh what a waste, gotta put it back inside... Sensei, i tell you one thing, this girl is quite broken down. Ha She's nicely scretched in front of us today. Kya She will cum directly after you shoved her insides. Please don't get fooled by her cute face. Kuh That... About that thing... Haa... Aah...You embarass me. Come on, show us your real nature hn Fuhn Nfuh I know you don't feel that embarassed Or should i enter my own switch on you, huh. Ah That hole is going to be very famous you know. ================================================================== -------- Page #18 -------- Hn We'll punish you here if you're slacking in our sex lecture. We'll take off your clothes all the time... Chu Chuph Nhhf if you're broken down. Chu Chu Fuhh Wow, is the switch already entered ? well then Will you lick my penis again ? Kuhh Ahaa...hh Please I will lick it, I Really love it... Alright then, tell me what kind of cock that you really love ? I love cock like this one....nhhh It stands up very fast like a kid's cock.. What about semen ? Do you like to be filled to the brim with cum ? Yes i love it. As I thought, the number one i love is when it's spurting out wildly inside me.... You love being sprayed all over by cum too, right. What about sucking til it's really sticky with saliva ? Sheeesh that's the best... I love it So you're going to be A Yes-Woman, right. Ahn Come on, Hold it in your mouth. Sensei is already waiting Ohh ================================================================== -------- Page #19 -------- Like I said, Sensei is already waiting.... Nfuh Fuh When she wakes up, she'll be gulping down the cum. I have to be careful so that i won't cum too fast...Nghhh When you see her like this. Actually she's quite lewd. Not only today, ...We've already trained her properly by fucking with everyone Fuh Hafh Back then too. You also came here, right. You won't believe it how far We go as her training partner everyday In order to call her, you have to make a reservation as her partner. so, weekend is specially reserved for guys in the automotive club, huh ? You're right....Hnnhh, this is making me shiver. I forgot how many times i had cum...Hnnnh Hah Hah ================================================================== -------- Page #20 -------- Uhaahh Oh oohh Ku...uh i can't resist this.... Sooner or later all members is going to be overhead addicted to this girl. Chu Chu Hah That's right I bet she'll let them do their dirty delusion as they please...hnnh Chu There are so many of those skipping-lecture bastards...hnnhh Chu Chu Chu Eventhough this university got so many talented girls I guess the automotive club Won't add more extra girls like this one. ================================================================== -------- Page #21 -------- Owh I almost forgot Soon it'll be nice for using your tits too. Nh Huh ? Have you finished that blowjob, huh ? Hey Sensei look at this girl's breast You can't resist that, can you ? Chu Ha Fuh Chu This is the secret, but everyone in the club already know this. it's big & the shape is good Aa...h She's quite mature But she still feels shy to show this. ================================================================== -------- Page #22 -------- You see, this girl is This kind of girl Ha Fuah Hah Hah A...Haa... Hah Don't make me trouble, okay... Fuah Kuh Look ! Kya... Aa..h Wow that's so great.... Does it feel good to store this much milk ? Ha Ha Ah...haaa Yes, you're so good at it...Aah You spurt such amazing amount, i bet you'll be a splendid mama. No way, nhhhn Noooo.... Ahaa...h ================================================================== -------- Page #23 -------- Ah Ah Wow superb...it won't stop/ You still spurting, huh ? It's guzzling out wildly. Haa...Yes...Hnnh More..Nhh Don't strain her. Squeeze more. It used to be so difficult to milk her...Whoaa. I'm lactating... My milk... Nh..hhh So great... I can't take it.... I.... I know it...You're Just perverts. Awesome, looks like she's feeling good... Ah Her milk is warm... Her nipple is erecting too. Ha Haah Haah Her milk is coming out she looks so charming. Hey Let's see how far she has changed. ================================================================== -------- Page #24 -------- Fuh If we milk her everyday, surely this what would happen. Fuh Fuhh So easy to undestand...so who will accept this milking duty ? Hah Ah Do you hate ... Milking me ? I mean this breast milk... Nope, it's just sounds like a lecher's job That's good, isn't it. It's exactly feels like sex. Haa Haa Haa Yeah, that's it, that face looks so lewd, Owh I can't bear it. How many man that have fallen for that lewd manner ? LICK Fuh Nfuh Ha Chu Anyone will definitely gather to taste that body. ================================================================== -------- Page #25 -------- She also got that soft ass. Yes That slippery pussy too That embracable plumpy hips too. Yes Yes Nhh Yes Eek This milking out breast too. I thought this is more than just human's body. More, more entertain me. I'll spray all my semen all over you. Hah Yes Fuh Yes Remember those dirty words... Nfuh Nfuh Fuhh Fuuuh Fuuuh If we do it like this more amazing milk will come out...nhh Her sellling point price is in the top price list, you know ================================================================== -------- Page #26 -------- Oh well, it's business, Do you think its good to cum alone, huh. Hah Haah Haaah Hah Hah I'm... So sorry...Hnnh.... But that's good. You look erotic enough Aah, can't take it...Hnghh...after you finish with sensei. Will you let me fuck you again ? Haa ...Ye-ss...Nghh More...Please teach me a lot of things...Ngghhhh Hah Haa Well then, I won't hold back, I'll cum & pour all of it inside. Kyaa...I'm..Nghhh shivering....Nghhh I'll pump all my cum inside you Ahhh it's sucking me in. Hey Mr.Guest, Let me tell you one thing. Don't get surprised if I suddenly come and wait here. ================================================================== -------- Page #27 -------- Sorry for making you wait...please come in Hah This shop is selling girls like me. My name is Belldandy... Would you buy me please ? Yes... This is my lewd holes... They're all exist as your partner...So that you can insert your penis there. No matter which hole you choose, It will give you amazing pleasure. Please fill it by thrusting your penis inside. You can pump all your semen to the hole that mostly feels so good... Please don't hold back & pour it all inside me...Hnhhh ================================================================== -------- Page #28 -------- You came back to fuck me, right Hah Yes , I came back to fuck you... Hah Afterall we're coming here to gangrape you, you know. I think so...I lost my sex match with that guest... ...but it felt really good... Did it felt that good ? That feels great...for me... Please...Take your time to make love to me thoroughly... Now that you mention it...I got called by anonymous number so many times before.... So you don't know who's calling you, huh ? Maybe the caller is a lewd person like me too... The caller said some nice words : "I'm shivering...Hnnh Can't hold myself from fuckng"... ...if the caller says dirty thing like that, you might be in danger. Ahaaa...hh...I see I'm really sorry. ================================================================== -------- Page #29 -------- ...Really, if you wear that clothes. Your mood seems to be changing. I think you look so worried sometime ago Now you're just like any ordinary girl. ...Owh really ? That's lewd, you know. Come on Don't you want to check me out down here ? Well, No we will do it after we come back...hh ------------ Page #30-31 ------------ Blank ================================================================== -------- Page #32 -------- Rectangle box 1 As usual she is very kind with that smiling face... So beautiful. Rectangle box 2 That reminds me. I've never seen her angry face.... Rectangle box 3 I wonder, Does senpai can get angry too... ? I really envy her What's more, she looks like a model for painting. If it's me, I could also do some simple sweeping... She looks shining... maybe like a shining sun ? Hey your hands are freezing. Uwaaah If you have finished arranging would you like some tea ? Ahaah Thanks to senpai, I can finish this figure balance in my script this month. I'm thinking of making a new clubroom again. It's doing well, but I'm so impatience. Should I just take out these retiring members.... ================================================================== -------- Page #33 -------- Both of us are restarting the automotive club well enough. So, it's about time to recruit new member, huh ? We need personal to say "Thanks for coming", then we will select the fitting person. Yes, I think so. You can leave it to me. Alright,... Since you want to help Let's hold the automotive club's tradition. ..."The Enjoyable Lunch" Owh Looks like we need a good idead to hype it up... such as stage maker... Owh, i get it. I'm thinking of using Skuld-chan But i've seen this stage thing so many times. Should they just come for an interview ? Owh...Well... I'm not sure skuld will do that. ... I see, come directly for interview, huh. Is it alright if we do it carefully later ? If i'm not mistaken we have another arrangement today... Aaahh !? You're right AAaaa Se-, Senpai hurry, hurry get ready ! ================================================================== -------- Page #34 -------- Aah, Your late Se-, Se- Senpai, hurry hurry Nhhh ...Hey Why are you wearing hard-to-move clothes... Is this clothes weird ? But I really want to try this for once... Rectangle Box 1 ...Oh my Hnh When We're in trouble... Rectangle Box 2 No matter what condition it is, Belldandy senpai's smiling face always solve the problem... You're late, what the hell are you doing. You're bothering him, right ? Hey, you automotive club freak. Uuuh... So-, Sorry it was my mistake. Eeeerr.. Hnh I'm the one who choose this clothes, we're late because i got confused which one to wear. We also need time to think about the preparation, you know. We're very sorry, thanks for waiting. ================================================================== -------- Page #35 -------- E,Eerrrr....It's time for a little service... Uaaah, they're already here... He can't take it so he got nosebleed. ...Excuse me, what's with this set/ We're from theater research society So, let me tell you this, ...huh, Hey ! What're you hiding behind that silky basket ? No, well Look straight before your eyes... He's just not drunk enough... You're slut...aren't you. Get ready to start from me Oh Hah Mffuh Haugh Oh...Hey I'll take care of that face....Hnh, Show it to me. Say, "Aaaan" ! (What's with that absentminded face)... ================================================================== -------- Page #36 -------- Uhaah I'm Cum-... Cumming Ah Finally, I can see this, Kuuhh !! Oh, hey turn her face here Hnh I made it ...Hnh I cum from rubbing against her back ear ...! Uoohhh..oh, Ooh my dick, feels so great... Cumming...Hnh This feels so great...! Kyaa Ohh sorry ...Hnh Hey don't rush her ...Hnh Break her down Rubbing it with her rolled hair... feels so good Hnh Come on, Come on, Don't look that way... What a nice facial Hnnhh Hey Hey, everyone... Don't force her too far, alright ? Hah Puhaa Spurt Spurt Wait..! Let me target my shot to you ! Her cheek is all sticky, feels so soft. Come on, your head ! I want to try this white back...Hnh ! Kya... Nh Nh ================================================================== -------- Page #37 -------- Hah Great Fuhh This is for Today's cum Uha Goh Guh Take it Khuuh Shuooo Fuuuhh Ugh Ugh Hn Hn Rectangle box 1 Today is 7 mei, she's working parttime job for 60 minutes. Rectangle box 2 Sometimes there's a popular request... For this kind of play. Rectangle box 3 It's not as easy as it looks... Actually it's quite troublesome. Ooh... What a pretty accessory... Spurt Eeeeh Hey, You cum in that maniac spot again,... Wait, Don't lift up your face...Nhhn Rectangle box 4 Customer will gather around her with their high-storaged cum. Hiiih NNh Ah that hurts Spurt Jizz Hey, you hear me ? are you okay ? Hnh ? Yes, I can hear...you/ Fuh Fuh Ahh Ah Rectangle box 5 Those guys are imagining they can fullfil their desire... Uhaa...She's all sticky awesome... Aah... Look at her breast..Hnnnh She got such a big breast ! Rectangle box 6 & Their desire keeps on escalating... ================================================================== -------- Page #38 -------- Wa-, Wait... Don't play her too rough... I can't hold it back ! Don't worry it's alright if we get a bit rough Fuh Hah Aaah, Don't come ! Damn, I can't direct the shot to her crack...Hnnh Huh ? what's with this clothes... Rectangle box 1 Someone need to effectively control them from running wild... Ah, Eeerrr Nothing for today !? No activity today, get it ? HOw about you, Why do you come late ? You said you'll give us a little service. We've heard the rumour, you know. Puhaa Aaa, yes. That rumour ! It's alright even if yuo strip her off to nude, isn't it ? I also see her appear in a video, it's your doing, right ? It said she will let us rub her cute breast. You have nothing to hide now ! let's just strip off her breast. Rectangle box 2 Ever since Belldandy senpai volunteers, those bastards are doing her as they please... Puhaa Fuh Fuh That sounds good ! She's even sexier than in the video Rectangle box 3 She is always washed away by lewd situation like that... Come on, Come on, Show us your breast. ================================================================== -------- Page #39 -------- Rectangle box 1 Senpai, it turned out into famous rumour. There are so many hard-cumming bastard this time... I'm not so... Good in doing this stuff... I'll decide that later Yeah, yeah, that's good... It's true, she's drinking it... Kya Just from shaking her up... She looks this damn sexy. Ngh This necklace is in the way. Let's take it off. Here it comes ! Uhaahh ! Awesome ! It's very big... Moreover her nipples are erected, huh ? Well, let's use this big breasts...Hnh Aahh Ahh Ahh Aah Let's use her face too ...Hnhh I'll make her drink our cumshot... ================================================================== -------- Page #40 -------- Poh Poh Keho (Cough Sound) Keho Keh Hoh Kaaahh...Awesome, She's gathering our cum. If it's like this, it means you're begging "Please Rape Me" "Rape Me", aren't you ? Don't you afraid of us ? This is like the famous "Gangrape" isn't it. That's why, it's good, isn't it. Please take care of everyone here.We won't hold back & command you like our subordinate, We don't care what happens later. But, we can only spreading cum, Huh. Whoa, Today I can get rid of that "No" Answer from her. I love filling her mouth to the brim while she's rolling her tounge. Uhaaahhh... What a soft Lips... Let it out...! Uuh, Uuugh Nhh Gubh Ngh Yeah, Yeah Let it out, Let it out, Hnnhh... Npuh Fuhh Nh Nhh Fu Ngh Nh Buhaaahh ! Awesome, Ooohhh, she feels so good, Hnnh Uhaahh this lewd tounge ...Hnnh it's sucking me in ....Hnnh Aah...Cumming ================================================================== -------- Page #41 -------- Uph Puh Puh Ha Ha... Her pretty cheek is drenched... Just like that, I splattered my cum inside her mouth. Rectangle box 1 Belldandy senpai is very quiet. Nh That's so good come on, shake it Nhii Npuh Npuh Uph Khaaah she's so dirty. spilling out the cum from her mouth again. Whoa I'm hard again... She feels shudder with that worried face... She's very suited to serve many guys. Let's see.. ? Ohh this mouth will be lump of meat to fulfill our sexual desire... Fuh Ohh it's overflowing... Is she already at her limit ? No, that's nothing. She still got some more ! Fuh Hiih Yeah, yeah, I want to try that piece of H-O-L-E ! Want me to move it ? Alright, Ahh is that good ? Fuhii Rectangle box 2 They're riding her like giving punishment to her... Buhii (pig sound) Nhn Nhh Nghh Nghnh ================================================================== -------- Page #42 -------- Nhh Nghh Hiih Hiih Nh Uohh...I'm cumming Nhh Feels...so great Nhh Is it coming inside properly, huh ? Nghiiih Nhn Nh Bupi Guhh Fugh Nhiiih Yes Nfuhh Nghh Yes Oh Oh What a great facial, Look, From her nose... Don't worry, I'm still holding back... You drink that, huh ? You know that's so honest & cute. Puhh Yeah, Keep it that way, Take it, Take it Nhh Nghh Puhh Ugh Ugh Uhaa...h Can't take it....Hnh Uo...hh I came so hard Like this...Come on suck it ! Ugh Nfuhh Buh Kahaaa Nghah Ah Bifh Aaaah... it's gushing it from... That spot again... Ngohhh Kahh Gohhh Gohoohh Nh Guess she can't breath in....With that great amount of sperm. She's shivering... Fuhh Kah ha Ngh ================================================================== -------- Page #43 -------- Ohh Fuah Fuahh Guhiiii Guhiiinh Hah... Yes Please... Don't treat my insides awfully Lick Lick Look she's so... cute ! She looks like she's going to burst. Ahn... Gha Aghh Ghh Come on, Cum on her as many as you want ! Look at her She's so excited Haggh Hiafn Hiih HiiH Hih Bufh Bufh Spurt There's a lot cum in her ear too... Nghiih Nghiih Uhaahhh...Her aroused face is so sticky ! Ngufh Nhii Ngfuh Look, she's breathing in cum ! Good, she's obidient Fghah Let see, How much cum packed in your nose ? Nhii Nfuh Uhaah There's so much cum entering her nose Nhah Ah Come on show it to everyone. Aaah she looks broken down Fuhh Hahh Fuhiih Habh Hah Fuahh Aah ================================================================== -------- Page #44 -------- Hiiih Fuhh Fuhii Yes ! Her teeth feels so slippery Ahh what a good sensation The cum looks like her toothpaste Yes, I'm laughing Uugh... She become this lewd just from violating her mouth. Look at her face when i tease this spot... Aagh Fugh Uhaaahh, Awesome ! She spilled it from her big mouth Fuh Ha Haah Buhaah Tasty ! Buhiiih ! Buhiiih Buhii She's making such a slutty face ! Let's take a photo Uuuh it's spourting out... Yeah like that, You're a loose slut. She's like a different person when she's cumming Hey... isn't that too far ? Don't worry, whatever we do, she won't get angry. She's also in the good mood anyway... Go on you slut Say this, "Thanks for the hardwork" I'll hang out with her a little longer. ================================================================== -------- Page #45 -------- Hohh Nhh Obufhh Nghh Kuhaaaahhh...Look at her... Owh you definitely want to try this for once... Nhhh Come on, Next is my turn, You hear me. Ahii Hiiin Make sure you drink all of it. Ohh good girl, good girl. Ooh Gaaf Ughh Ugoh Ghoh Nghh Fuh Uffuh Buhaah Nfuhh Nbuhh Ngfuh Puhh Ohaah Nfuahh Oghah Hiii...she's drinking it for real. Gulp Fuah Gahh Go on drink it drink it... Ngah Fuhah Nhhih Hih Your belly is already swollen with cum, then you came, huh... Npuhh... Fuhiii Ohh Nbuhii Ohhiii Nbuh Nhh Yes Hiiiihn ================================================================== -------- Page #46 -------- ...Ooh yes... Yes Hnh More...Give me More Nhhh let me drain your penis... Don't just pass out on me, get it? Give it to me Hagh Ah Hah Give it to me ghhh Maybe she's already broken Nhah Yes Heey, Wake up your mind, get back here. Owh, look, she regains conciousness, ahh so cute... Ha Just leave it that way, let's go together with her to the bathroom Afterall, we got dried-up, can't cum anymore. Hah Fuh Hu-... Ha... Huh...? If we beg for it, Of course she'll let us do her in the bath, right ? Looks like she'll hear any request. Would you like to hear our thoughts ? Fuh if she heard that, wouldn't she get angry ? Well that's... Ha ha...ha ? ================================================================== -------- Page #47 -------- They're just first time apprentice. But this is quite much..Nhh I could get addicted to this smell...what should i do ? Rectangle box 1 ..No matter what time it is Senpai always puts on that smiling face... Rectangle box 2 ...Her angry face is so lovely. ... Aah ... Rectangle box 3 ...Strict scolding Why is she scolding me too Rectangle box 4 Even senpai also has the time when she could get angry. ================================================================== -------- Page #48 -------- Fuh... ....Fuh Are youo surprised today...? Knowing that I'd do such lewd things ================================================================== -------- Page #49 -------- Are you alright...? Please don't go anywhere, aright. It's for your own sake, you know... ================================================================== -------- Page #50 -------- Blank ================================================================== -------- Page #51 -------- Blank ================================================================== This post has been edited by DGze: Aug 26 2012, 04:35 -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 26 2012, 04:18 Post #14
Goatse Top Posters 2014 Group: Members Posts: 976 Joined: 20-December 08 Level 255 (Godslayer) +K	I'm open for any suggestion, if it's really poor , would be good if he mention and guide me which part is the "poor translation" so I could improve it next time xD EDIT : Sorry if miss the "Sensei" hahaha i'm so tired that night can't see right. Hmm about Okyaku-san , i think customer n guests are the same thing if you go to a brothel house ok let's make it customer not a problem xD. And i'm sorry i have to disagree about the plot, in my translation version : - That announcement is just formality , and i think the translation meaning is not reserved because it is a "meeting" for a gangbang in that school , so i make it as "First" that means First Meeting Second also means Second Meeting (this means the last meeting) , actually Technical meeting for registration always made in two session, i want to make it last but it won;t fit, so I put "Second" - belldandy was ordered to work to collect money for the chief , - belldandy goes to scout to many schools and aiming for the bad boys , usually auto club in japan always related to Motorcycle Gang, she pretend that she's lost and end up in that room - That room is , sorry but i prefer automotive , there are some says that it's automobile but it depends on how you prefer, while for me auto club is not descriptive enough for a first hentai reader that's why i use automotive - Then she got ended up there and in that room those guys are High School student n his teacher who usually call a high school postitute and enjoy her together, but they were abit surprised because the woman turn up to be Belldandy which is older & university student. - Thus belldandy got fucked over n over, they put some kind of switch hypnothize technique so she lost track of time, and for months she has been there n being trained by those auto club. Well anyway that's my translated version QUOTE The "circle/club" part I can recognize as a valid error, since they can be used interchangeably. [www.nagoya-u.ac.jp] http://www.nagoya-u.ac.jp/en/academics/campus-life/clubs/ In terms of english translation, it's best to just say Club. Also, a "circle" doesn't necessarily mean doujin circle. 自殺サークル = Suicide Circle = the film Suicide Ciub. Logically, you should have caught that it was way out of place to mention doujin circle all of a sudden. In my version , the place where belldandy goes is highschool (somewhere ) so firstly if you look at that sentences that guy is not seriously talking about circle as "club" because mostly motor gangs are stupid n naughty , so the man just tell to belldandy, about how is the university recognition announcement , just for information usually this is the most desperate time for HighSchool students, Most of the teachers will come there & see the list, so the dialogue just trying to show a joke , while comparing teacher that really cares in students life, and doujin circle guys who seem so calm n don't care about anything other than their doujin-stuff xD . and that sentence means that even the most carefree student such as doujin circle (club) will mostly come to see their future in university life xD, eventhough some doujin circle guys ended up as rounin but it's ok if you want your translated plot version, I enjoy translating this n fapped many times hahaha xD well Don't worrt I don't mean any offense , i respect you n i think yours is better than me This post has been edited by Goatse: Aug 26 2012, 05:38 -------------------- Wali Allaah who can give you instant money in Cash right in front of your eyes, i can send money from a far distance directly, so if you have Doujin/H-Manga that you can translate into english, DO CONTACT ME". \| Message from Princess Ursula in Green Castle = Do not hesitate to call for help to the nearest police station if you are threatened by rogue police officers in united kingdom(UK) Send me your translation works, i have made so many commissions to SAHA and LWB for a while now. 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Aug 26 2012, 04:42 Post #15
DGze Headphone Fetishist \| Luna's Bride Group: Catgirl Camarilla Posts: 1,042 Joined: 12-February 12 Level 358 (Godslayer) +K	QUOTE(###### @ Aug 25 2012, 22:18) I'm open for any suggestion, if it's really poor , would be good if he mention and guide me which part is the "poor translation" so I could improve it next time xD EDIT : Sorry if miss the "Sensei" hahaha i'm so tired that night can't see right. Hmm about Okyaku-san , i think customer n guests are the same thing if you go to a brothel house ok let's make it customer not a problem xD. And i'm sorry i have to disagree about the plot, in my translation version belldandy was ordered to work to collect money for the chief , but it's ok if you want your translated plot version, i think yours is better than me I don't see how you can miss the sensei part. You didn't miss it on page 16, and you also twisted the meaning of the whole line. The "circle/club" part I can recognize as a valid error, since they can be used interchangeably. [www.nagoya-u.ac.jp] http://www.nagoya-u.ac.jp/en/academics/campus-life/clubs/ In terms of english translation, it's best to just say Club. Also, a "circle" doesn't necessarily mean doujin circle. 自殺サークル = Suicide Circle = the film Suicide Ciub. Logically, you should have caught that it was way out of place to mention doujin circle all of a sudden. The "hasegawa" part just tells me you 1)need some familiarity with the work & 2) Need to research into your kanjis. (Even if you have no clue who Hasegawa was, you could have typed it into google to find a correct pronunciation.) This is not a my plot/your plot issue. I've let a lot of stuff slide. ------------------- I will help you out on specific translations edit my post/your translation some more, but I'm taking a break for now. My intention right now is stop any poor editor from wasting the effort to edit it. Also your translation order is out of whack on some pages. It needs to be right to left for the page, and then top to bottom for the bubbles. You were just going from right to left on some pages and ignoring the top down order. It's best to label which bubble you're translating like this : /index.php?showt...871&st=540# or a format like this: (Page 1) [panel 1] Bell: xxx guy: yyy Bell: zzz sfx1: aaa sfx2: bbb [panel 2] ..... (page 2) Editors who can't read japanese wouldn't be able to track where your translation is suppose to go to. QUOTE(###### @ Aug 25 2012, 22:18) - That announcement is just formality , and i think the translation meaning is not reserved because it is a "meeting" for a gangbang in that school , so i make it as "First" that means First Meeting [i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/dl73v.jpg 1) The official English name is "NIT MCC" M stands for Motor. Better to just stick with motor. 2) 予約よやく 1: reservation; appointment; booking; advance order; 2: contract; subscription; pledge Common word, Noun, Suru verb, No-adjective [jisho.org] http://jisho.org/words?jap=%E4%BA%88%E7%B4...&dict=edict I give up, k? This post has been edited by DGze: Aug 26 2012, 05:02 -------------------- \| My Galleries \|

Aug 26 2012, 18:06 Post #16
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	I have asked for further opinions here, and other translators are quite critical of the script provided. As such, I am afraid will have to reject the script. If another translator is found who decides he can salvage parts of it, then I am fine with that person sharing parts of the bounty with ######. -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream

Aug 27 2012, 01:58 Post #17
Goatse Top Posters 2014 Group: Members Posts: 976 Joined: 20-December 08 Level 255 (Godslayer) +K	Any outcome is fine with me , i've enjoyed translating it, -------------------- Wali Allaah who can give you instant money in Cash right in front of your eyes, i can send money from a far distance directly, so if you have Doujin/H-Manga that you can translate into english, DO CONTACT ME". \| Message from Princess Ursula in Green Castle = Do not hesitate to call for help to the nearest police station if you are threatened by rogue police officers in united kingdom(UK) Send me your translation works, i have made so many commissions to SAHA and LWB for a while now. I am interested in receiving CD/DVD/BD of anime series / movies , if you have one , do send it to me , i can send you real money from Jannah (Surga/Tengoku) directly to you I CAN GIVE YOU INSTANT MONEY IF YOU TRANSLATE DOUJIN/H-MANGA INTO ENGLISH LANGUAGE , I AM A WALI AFDHOL MUKARROM AJMA'IIN, ALL ARABIC ULAMA in SAUDI ARABIA (WHATEVER COUNTRY IT IS) KNOW ME, YOUR E-HENTAI.org's server is currently stored in my Jannah(Surga/Tengoku), Ursula is the current Tenboro, so it's my wife who maintain this e-hentai.org stuff QUOTE I AM NOW THE CURRENT LEADER OF SOMETHING MORE THAN DUNIYA WAL AKHIRAT , If you are a manga artist/doujinshi artist/doujin sage , DO CONTACT ME THROUGH PRIVATE MESSAGE (PM) , I am currently affiliated with BoBoBo Team in Kouga Darussalaam (Used to be called "Japan" though, but it's not called like that anymore) :). Youshould learn more about the bounty system to understand its awesomeness. Everything you wish to be translated, can be quickly served by playing Hentaiverse. [ul.e-hentai.org] Start posting your translation bounty ~mARRy me, I'm going to get you through this, Laruffii Grebber ~ La Pucelle d'Orléans ~

Aug 28 2012, 18:38 Post #18
Red of EHCOVE Viceroy of Oook & EHCOVE cofounder Group: Gold Star Club Posts: 9,478 Joined: 28-April 07 Level 354 (Godslayer) +K	Glad to see you are a good sport. I've created a consolation bounty for you, as you went to some effort (it is just not up to our standards): http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=6372 Now, I wonder if we can get another translator to work on this in the near future? This post has been edited by Red_Piotrus: Aug 28 2012, 18:39 -------------------- Tag check Backlogs: expunge rename K+ Created tags you can blame me for: clamp (def, use), clone (def, use), closed eyes (def, use), dismantling (def, use), facial hair (def, use), fishnets (def, use), hair buns (def, use), headless (def, use), hood (def, use), horns (def, use), kemonomimi (def, use), missing cover (def, use), sarashi (def, use), sketch lines (def, use), soushuuhen (def, use), tail (def, use) Tags significantly changed: filming (def, use), large tattoo (def, use), exhibitionism Interesting tag proposals/revisions under discussion (please consider commenting): anon, below knee boots, calendar, clueless (aka naive), couple (two people having sex), eye-covering bang, hat, helmet, husband and wife (aka married couple, spouse), phone/camera scan, under knee high boots / below knee boots, watching Tags I am thinking about proposing (be scared / PM me with comments/examples): butt plug, covered in cum, halo, high heels, metal bikini, mentally retarded, miniskirt, ribbon headband, samurai, self-sucking, socks, flora/vegetable insertion (please post examples here), veil Play some games and rip them for the galleries My scan commissions Can you read Japanese? Do you want lots of GP/creds/hath? Visit our bounty subforum! Extra rewards if you translate posted EHCOVE bounties or my proposed projects here! (Also looking for editors and proofreaders). Celebrate EHCOVE's 5th Anniversary and check out our first exclusive Artist/Game CG set release, the OPTC Nude Project: A Man's Dream

Aug 28 2012, 19:28 Post #19
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Aug 29 2012, 04:00 Post #20
Goatse Top Posters 2014 Group: Members Posts: 976 Joined: 20-December 08 Level 255 (Godslayer) +K	@Red Piotrus Thank you for your kind intention , but i don't need compensation, I got more than enough credits for me xD http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=3634 I just did the translation coz , it was a call to my soul as Oh My Goddess Fans xD. If you get the next series of that RPG Company , pls tell me, I would gladly translate it xD -------------------- Wali Allaah who can give you instant money in Cash right in front of your eyes, i can send money from a far distance directly, so if you have Doujin/H-Manga that you can translate into english, DO CONTACT ME". \| Message from Princess Ursula in Green Castle = Do not hesitate to call for help to the nearest police station if you are threatened by rogue police officers in united kingdom(UK) Send me your translation works, i have made so many commissions to SAHA and LWB for a while now. I am interested in receiving CD/DVD/BD of anime series / movies , if you have one , do send it to me , i can send you real money from Jannah (Surga/Tengoku) directly to you I CAN GIVE YOU INSTANT MONEY IF YOU TRANSLATE DOUJIN/H-MANGA INTO ENGLISH LANGUAGE , I AM A WALI AFDHOL MUKARROM AJMA'IIN, ALL ARABIC ULAMA in SAUDI ARABIA (WHATEVER COUNTRY IT IS) KNOW ME, YOUR E-HENTAI.org's server is currently stored in my Jannah(Surga/Tengoku), Ursula is the current Tenboro, so it's my wife who maintain this e-hentai.org stuff QUOTE I AM NOW THE CURRENT LEADER OF SOMETHING MORE THAN DUNIYA WAL AKHIRAT , If you are a manga artist/doujinshi artist/doujin sage , DO CONTACT ME THROUGH PRIVATE MESSAGE (PM) , I am currently affiliated with BoBoBo Team in Kouga Darussalaam (Used to be called "Japan" though, but it's not called like that anymore) :). Youshould learn more about the bounty system to understand its awesomeness. Everything you wish to be translated, can be quickly served by playing Hentaiverse. [ul.e-hentai.org] Start posting your translation bounty ~mARRy me, I'm going to get you through this, Laruffii Grebber ~ La Pucelle d'Orléans ~

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