Hello. I was wondering if anyone wants to help me Proofread these for me?

It's most the Legend Lyon Flare one, but it seems like I might still need help with my Record of Lodoss War on too.

Legend of Lyon Flare
Current translation: http://ehentaihip.com/g/1231794/40cf5963d9/
Untranslated: http://ehentaihip.com/g/293091/b0f6b1f001/

EROS & ELVES:
Current: http://ehentaihip.com/g/1230381/51648260f9/
Untranslated: http://ehentaihip.com/g/159513/c5aaaa8f11/

This post has been edited by q91: May 29 2018, 22:08