[X] My Assistant

Since ultimaflaral is the most prolific TL I've known in my career here (and that's on top on the high level of his TL skill), I'd like to recognize him by setting up this dedicated thread for his future scripts.

Also, I want to reduce the number of scripts in any given thread to avoid confusion

Some guidelines for editors:
* crappy editing will not be accepted. Crappy is defined as in - people would flame it in the forums, and experienced EHCOVE members would/will complain about it here;
* translated SFXes should be edited in unless they require substantial redrawing, about which we can negotiate;
* please include credits with the translator name (unless they requested here to be anonymous), yourself as an editor (if you want), and sponsor nickname (usually mine and those of others who contributed to this bounty significantly) as the sponsor(s), and the name of our site (E-hentai) as the host. Link to the Cove forums is good too, as is a funny cartoon (because I like them).
* Since I get often asked for examples of what EHCOVE style credit pages are, here are some credit pages I liked a lot: link; link; link; link; link; link; link; link; link; link;
* if you do the editing: please note I (or whoever is the primary EHCOVE sponsor/bounty poster) would like to upload the gallery to e-h system themselves; we are not expecting much profit, but as a fellow bounty poster said it, it's all about prestige. What one pays out with the bounty is usually worth more then the gallery will make in the year.

RED's TO DO LIST - approved by ulti's as in he will do them eventually, roughly from top to bottom

http://ehentaihip.com/g/16056/d8f698a250/ - OP Kurio 1st story (aka Shiawase no Punch 1)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/100073/f6f04d0a92/ (Mahou Shoujo Ai)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/804246/9ad1059dd4/ Code Geass Akito
http://ehentaihip.com/g/468291/880fa9d331/ (Various)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/326337/ca9e87bb64/ CTT Black Lagoon Zone dojin (51)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1094407/e97e8e0de1/ Macross
http://ehentaihip.com/g/480551/286a552e8b/ - Code Geass
http://ehentaihip.com/g/930281/3f740d0a80/ FGO anthology
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1060214/86fb358520/ Gakusen Toshi Asterisk (very short)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/591090/7a673058fb/ - FMPanic
http://ehentaihip.com/g/243169/92e91bb9eb/ - FSN Taiga
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1216279/07ba5b10c1/ Sidonia
http://ehentaihip.com/g/851944/285d950c72/ OP Kurio 2nd story (aka Shiawase no Punch 2)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/22218/43e9a17f42/ Gundam Seed yuri XX 1
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1201059/95501fd268/ - CTT Zone 35 BL story
http://ehentaihip.com/g/128678/3c9b264962/ (FSN) - with a nod towards the entire collected story arc at http://ehentaihip.com/g/367408/c77bdda83e/. See my comment in that gallery for what has been TLed already
http://ehentaihip.com/g/569124/8ec7b2bde9/ Code Geass
http://ehentaihip.com/g/851944/285d950c72/ - OP Kurio 3rd story (aka Shiawase no Punch 3
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1185375/90430c1dd2/ Gundam Seed yuri XX 2
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1387749/8aeacbc5f4/ CTT BL final book
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1286013/1b03c700cb/ FMP
http://ehentaihip.com/g/203010/66b9435e11/ (Saki)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1215802/345a33f30a/ Gundam Seed yuri XX 3
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1400186/15a56c7ee7/ GSM second story (yuri ghost possession)
http://ehentaihip.com/g/82302/3f433f0396/ - Eda x Revy x Rock
http://ehentaihip.com/g/216691/869bdc9af7/ - BL Sawyer story with plot etc.
http://ehentaihip.com/g/248/7324a44801/ Naruto story in the middle. Death Note optional if you like it. The third story is TL here http://ehentaihip.com/g/1037841/e51754b32e/
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1752899/50fcc30a01/ The Bleach gem that got scanned recently
http://ehentaihip.com/g/26076/de0e3484f1/ - CTT Bleach story 1
http://ehentaihip.com/g/109348/f9d4089baf/ Gundam Seed yuri XX 4
http://ehentaihip.com/g/807530/c0510f91ca/ Psycho Pass short set
http://ehentaihip.com/g/679486/1dcb8e1a34/ - CTT CodeGeass story
http://ehentaihip.com/g/173450/6b9ee96d48/ short (bubble wise) Bleach Mashiro story
http://ehentaihip.com/g/656480/e832e80657/#c1045467 only pages 105-111 are not translated yet, see my comment there
http://ehentaihip.com/g/300132/850f2bf1fe/ Nadesico long project. Part 4 for now?
http://ehentaihip.com/g/1349658/5d1e27d078/ very long One Piece dojin
http://ehentaihip.com/g/304786/17c402b521/ BL part. J is non-h and I'll leave it up to you
http://ehentaihip.com/g/300132/850f2bf1fe/ Nadesico long project. Part 5 goes here I guess?


http://ehentaihip.com/g/44968/4c974a9948/ CodeG editing may be a pain....
http://ehentaihip.com/g/300132/850f2bf1fe/ Nadesico long project. Part 6?
http://ehentaihip.com/g/778095/45c1edba47/ - CTT Bleach story 2
http://ehentaihip.com/g/849565/00a88945ac/ more One piece stuff, some was TLed, see my comment there
http://ehentaihip.com/g/304786/17c402b521/ BL+J
http://ehentaihip.com/g/517038/e5fb0e8f1b/ Gundam 00, note standing bounty here http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=19213 found a regular bounty taker for this, I think
http://ehentaihip.com/g/73580/d34aa8daaf/ Robn OP
http://ehentaihip.com/?f_search=artist%3Acri...n%24+love+hina+ CC Love Hina stuff
Nadesico 6+ as placeholder

This post has been edited by Red of EHCOVE: Aug 29 2022, 21:20

Niiiice!

And editing bounties:

http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10988
http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10989
http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10990

Edited the translation descriptions to include the bounty info. I've also DOUBLED those bounties. Editors, take note!

There's one more translation I want to bring up. The bounty itself is older than this thread, but there you go.


PROJECT COMPLETE!

[MDGK (Soichi Misuzu)] CROSS DRAGON (Dragonaut The Resonance)


Original Gallery: http://ehentaihip.com/g/366392/6512de3b4c/
Bounty Link: http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10506
Current Bounty amount: 100,000 credits + 40 hath

It's strange for me to be drawn to doujins parodying series I'm not familiar with, but this one has been gracing my "To Do" folder since the day I first started translating. Ignoring Eroge, this is probably my oldest Japanese translation. This is very much a "Bigger is Better" sort of doujin, though not quite to Anglachel levels.

This is sort of a special project, a "rescue operation," if you will. To make a short story shorter, I actually edited this doujin myself back when I was just first starting out, but (having NO real editing experience) the result was about two steps better than crap. What we're looking for for this bounty is an editor to either (1) redo the whole thing from the beginning, OR (2) take my GIMP .xcf files and turn crappy pages into respectable ones. Given the nature of this project, there isn't a script per se, but actual fully edited pictures with which to base your edits on.

PM me or Red_Piotrus if you're interested! As for the previous several bounties, my 2/3 hath per page bonus for good sfx redraws also applies, so get with me if that sounds good to you.

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Nov 1 2014, 03:54

Updated the bounty for the dragonaut dojin to 100k, I also want to see this backlog completed

All my current translation bounties from this thread have received a hath boost.

http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10506
http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10988
http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10989
http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10990

I'm also willing to convert all or part of these rewards to credits if that's preferable.

UF

I've doubled their credits value... c'mon, editors, those are some nice choices here

Another translation complete!


PROJECT COMPLETE!


 Fujishima_Spirits_3___3_tight.txt ( 23.83k ) Number of downloads: 98
Original Gallery Link: http://ehentaihip.com/g/27857/d52fcb5c39/
Bounty Link: http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=11100
Current Bounty: 60k credits + 30 hath

This is the third story in Fujishima Spirits 3, a decently long Oh My Goddess doujin featuring all four main characters. The art and characterization is quite representative of the original manga, which is always a plus. I wasn't actually looking forward to this one, but it really charmed me! Give it a chance and I think you'll like it!

Interested editors should respond in the Fujishima Spirits 3 thread: /index.php?showtopic=70717

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Mar 21 2015, 21:58

I'll be doing cross dragon

I'm currently editing http://ehentaihip.com/bounty.php?bid=10989
First half: [www.dropbox.com] https://www.dropbox.com/sh/lqxaxavd9wdc0d9/...41KntLAbHrQ5-Pa

I will be doing Tifa

Great to hear from both of you! The Cross Dragon bounty is now complete, so thanks to mathew1122 for quick, professional service. We've got a tentative deal for Mathew1122 to do Tifa no Yuuutsu as well, so we can all look forward to that too. Alearg's covering Magician of Chaos, which means only Weather Report ( /index.php?s=&am...t&p=3514497 ) is needing some love.

On a related note, new translation!!

PROJECT COMPLETE!

(C68) [Yabougumi (Kawamoto Hiroshi)] KURIKARA2 ver.DQ (Dragon Quest 8)

Original Gallery: http://ehentaihip.com/g/505699/07ada44522/
 Kurikara2.txt ( 5.28k ) Number of downloads: 101


I've always had a thing for Dragon Quest VIII's Jessica Albert, so I was happy to be doing this doujin. The art's a little dopey, and the story is a bit trippy in spots, but I rather enjoyed working on it. Editing-wise, this one slides in at 20 easy pages. Even better, we've already got a commitment from mathew1122 to serve as editor (part of the "deal" from above). It's an awesome feeling knowing we won't have to wait long for pages, so thanks again to him for that.

Curiously, this is actually my second DQ VIII translation, and my first also featured a little Jessica x Yangus action. That one may end up on the galleries soon as well, though I may wait to translate the rest of the collection it's from first. Either way, I've got at least 2 more DQ VIII doujins left in my To Do folder, so expect to see more Jessica around these parts in the near future!

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Nov 1 2014, 03:59

I will be doing KURIKARA

Oh wow, it's been a busy week around here! First off, a round of applause to mathew1122 for a stunning performance, translating three of our doujins in less than a week. He's already on the line for more too. Bravo, sir, you are a rockstar. You can find his new additions to our portfolio here (dragonaut), and here (Tifa). His third doujin (KURIKARA, dragon quest VIII) is in the final stages of post-production and will be linked here when it hits the galleries.

Next, I've got another couple projects ready for editors. In order:


PROJECT COMPLETE!

(C62) [Circle Taihei-Tengoku] ZONE 19 MURAMURAMURA!! (Urusei Yatsura)


Original Gallery: http://ehentaihip.com/g/207193/2040e2f435/
 MURAMURA.txt ( 3.43k ) Number of downloads: 95


Urusei Yatsura is an old series, but this little gem was too good to pass up. Full color, great art, huge text bubbles with small amounts of text... a real dream job for an editor all around. Relatively short too! I may need to look into more of Circle Taihei-Tengoku if all their stuff is this good. Mathew1122 is currently on break but has made an offer to edit this one as part of another "deal." Hopefully we'll all see it in English on the boards pretty soon!


Next project:


PROJECT COMPLETE!

[B-kyuu Site] B-kyuu Manga 3 Pack: Fucked by a Kong-Head


Original Gallery (NOTE: middle story): http://ehentaihip.com/g/399654/98991fe7d4/
"Script" pages: BY REQUEST ONLY
Revision script:  Revision_Script.txt ( 3.67k ) Number of downloads: 95


This is the second doujin I ever translated. It's Dragon Quest VIII's Jessica Albert again, who runs into a sticky situation after she sees the Hero and the Princess screwing in the Mystical Spring. I think I was actually playing DQVIII myself when I decided to translate this one. The image quality is decent, though not sterling.

Two things worth mentioning for this one. First, this is another "Rescue the Doujin from the Shitty Edits!!" sort of editing job. What this means is that I have images with fully typeset translations already. The problem is that they suck. They suck a lot, and I should know since I did them (my salad days, I was green in judgment). I'm not even willing to post them here, since I'm terrified they might end up in the galleries some how. (Interested editors, PM me and I'll send them to you). The advantages are (1) I have GIMP .xcf files the editor can use as a starting point for cleans, etc, and (2) there's no worries about putting the wrong text in the wrong bubbles since you can SEE where it goes. The "revision script" linked above is for necessary wording changes, mostly to improve the English.

Second, as you might notice from the link above, this is only one of the three doujins in this collection. I was considering translating all three, but I've decided that I just don't like the other two stories enough to do them for free. The Tifa doujin is kind of ugly to me, while the Lisa story, while better, is about a character I have no real interest in. If someone wanted to talk about setting up a bounty for one or both of these other stories, shoot me a PM. Otherwise, I figure this one will get published solo.

That's everything, guys! I'm looking forward to getting all these, plus Weather Report and Order of Chaos, onto the galleries!

UF

This post has been edited by ultimaflaral: Nov 1 2014, 04:00

Correct me if I am wrong, but all of the projects here have editing bounties or other editor agreements accounted for, yes?

Correct! The current list of in-progress projects (and their editors) is as follows:

Weather Report (One Piece: Nami): afire1 (temporarily stalled for injury)
Order of Chaos (Yu-Gi-Oh: Dark Magician Girl): alearg
MURAMURAMURA!! (Urusei Yatsura: Lum): mathew1122 (SCHEDULED, not started)
Fucked by a Kong-Head (Dragon Quest VIII: Jessica): mathew1122 (In progress)

UF

I will be doing Muramuramura

I can't believe this took me so long, here is the whole doujinshi.
[www.dropbox.com] https://www.dropbox.com/sh/lqxaxavd9wdc0d9/...41KntLAbHrQ5-Pa

I can't believe this took me so long, here is the whole doujinshi.
[www.dropbox.com] https://www.dropbox.com/sh/lqxaxavd9wdc0d9/...41KntLAbHrQ5-Pa

This is great stuff alearg! On the whole, things look damn near perfect. Specific notes are as follows:

page 25 and 26: Change all uses of "Master" to Mistress.

Page 27: Remove the asterisk from bubble 1. It was going to be used for a TL Note, but the actual doujin explains her effect in any case, so it wasn't really necessary.

LASTLY: This is going to be an EHCOVE release, so we need a simple, EHCOVE-style credits page.



The big decision to me is what to do about the TL Notes. I think they are valuable to the reader for something like this, but where to put them? There is one on page 3 (currently not on the page) and two on page 22, all of which are fairly lengthy. You could probably find room on page 3 to cram the last TL Note in, but it might be interesting to do them all on a separate page, where we could probably find actual pictures of the cards to go with the explanations. They would all look prettier that way, if nothing else. We could do this as part of the Credits page, in fact. If we went that way, page 3 and 22 would just need a simple "* See Credits Page for TL Notes!" message somewhere in the whitespace.

What do you think, alearg? How about you, Red_Piotrus?

UF

This is great stuff alearg! On the whole, things look damn near perfect. Specific notes are as follows:

page 25 and 26: Change all uses of "Master" to Mistress.

Page 27: Remove the asterisk from bubble 1. It was going to be used for a TL Note, but the actual doujin explains her effect in any case, so it wasn't really necessary.

LASTLY: This is going to be an EHCOVE release, so we need a simple, EHCOVE-style credits page.
The big decision to me is what to do about the TL Notes. I think they are valuable to the reader for something like this, but where to put them? There is one on page 3 (currently not on the page) and two on page 22, all of which are fairly lengthy. You could probably find room on page 3 to cram the last TL Note in, but it might be interesting to do them all on a separate page, where we could probably find actual pictures of the cards to go with the explanations. They would all look prettier that way, if nothing else. We could do this as part of the Credits page, in fact. If we went that way, page 3 and 22 would just need a simple "* See Credits Page for TL Notes!" message somewhere in the whitespace.

What do you think, alearg? How about you, Red_Piotrus?

UF

Yes, I think a separate page is a nice idea. I am always very supportive of such notes, and this is a good idea.

These are the cards mentioned, right?
[i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/N7UhtLx.jpg
[i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/T0dTaGI.jpg

And since "overlay network" isn't a card, I just include the explanation or also add a picture?

These are the cards mentioned, right?
[i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/N7UhtLx.jpg
[i.imgur.com] http://i.imgur.com/T0dTaGI.jpg

And since "overlay network" isn't a card, I just include the explanation or also add a picture?

Yeah, those look right. I would do some sort of picture for the overlay network as well. Just nab one of the bright, swirly pictures off of the yu-gi-oh wiki (or somewhere else if you like). It just feels like a shame to have pics for two of the TL Notes but not the third.

UF